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[Shadow battle episode 1]

Pretty generic.

The interactive battle was about the only twist. And why name the villain Mephiles? Something original would have been better.

Cody2819 responds:

Thanks, and well I didn't have an choice. Mephiles is an canon Sonic character from Sonic 06.

[Ww2 Airfighters]

Lame.

I'm a World War II fan, so it would have been nice if you had put more effort into this game. Like maybe having different settings from WW2 and different aircraft to choose from. What is the player flying, a Shturmovic or a Lavochkin (I noticed the red star)? Is the enemy flying a Messerschmitt or a Focke? And is that bomber A Heinkel or a Junker? You get my drift.

And the hero gets the realistic 50-cal while the enemy planes fire energy balls in all directions? Must be some secret Nazi weapon.

Arrotino responds:

The player (should) flies a french plane with a russian skin lol
The first three little bombers are Junkers.
The Big fortress at the end game is (probalby) a GIANT Henkel lol.
The enemy fighters have only the skin of a german fighter.

but i could be wrong.. eh eh .. Try another play with the game.

[How to Make Game]

You left out the most important part...

The code.

[Sky Captain]

Not bad, but not exciting either.

It's a bit slow paced and the enemy bullets are a little hard to see sometimes. Did you use Actionscript 2 or Actionscript 3?

eidosk responds:

thanks. The game is made in AS3

[Paper Yoshi 2: Demo II]

Fail.

Major bug. I lost the race before it started. Didn't you test play this before you uploaded?

[Nyanaella Galaxy Princess]

Why did you submit?

Why would you submit this before it isn't finished? It's a shooter that you can't actually shoot yet. Even if you say, "just avoid the enemies", the hero is too slow and the enemies are too big for it to possible to avoid them. I'd give you some pointers, but I can tell by your long author comment that you really only meant to waste everyone's time with this.

[LFF-Meet the Cast]

What's with their teeth?

I couldn't help but notice that most of your animals had the enlarged buck teeth like a rodent. Okay, so it looks cute but animals like foxes, cats, bears, etc, don't have teeth like that. It makes your characters look stupid and disorienting. Your audience will have a hard time accepting the character is a cat when they're drawn like a rodent for example.

THEKRAIDSTER responds:

They're drawn in a Happy Tree Friends-related art style. They give bears those teeth. And raccoons. And porcupines.