Not bad.
I think it would be much more exciting if you actually did the battle screens when they pokebattle.
Not bad.
I think it would be much more exciting if you actually did the battle screens when they pokebattle.
thx :)
I thought the battle scene was a bit dull and basic but... maybe your right
.... I will try my best to fit one in for you!
What do you mean?
Last time I checked, guys bury themselves in video games because they can't get a date.
It's okay...
I'm sure once the plot shows itself it will be a lot more interesting.
Yeah this one was sort of just to introduce the characters and setting, so I could add on to it without having odd ends everywhere. I'm still pretty new to writing, but its a lot of fun.
I wanted to see the Princess...
But you left her out. Anyway, nice start but maybe some mouths and subtitles would help immensely.
Yeah, I couldn't find a voice actor for the Princess, and her lines weren't very important... because I forgot she gave you the lute. So now I have to add that in later.
Sorry. No cigar.
Not clever. Not funny. Maybe you should stick with the action flashes.
Getting better.
Try putting your backgrounds on a different layer from your drawings. It might make it easier to draw more interesting backgrounds.
Cool.
Oops. I have the sound effects for super saiyan. I should have sent them to you. Well, maybe next time. Or we can still fix it if you want.
Meh.
The artwork was great but the skits and gags lacked cleverness. It involved mostly humor about creepy people and friends arguing which is great if you find that stuff funny, but not everyone does. The previous nin10doh's had more all encompassing humor. Plus the gags it did have were repeated through out the skits. So in short, I laughed my ass off at the first two nin10doh's, but I didn't laugh once for this one.
Boring.
Might have been more interesting if Dr. Wily had created seven robots based on the deadly sins and Megaman had to beat each one in some clever way.
O' Deadly Night.
I don't know why his singing is killing them, but it sure is funny as hell.
haha deadly night al right
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