Not bad.
I think it would be much more exciting if you actually did the battle screens when they pokebattle.
Not bad.
I think it would be much more exciting if you actually did the battle screens when they pokebattle.
thx :)
I thought the battle scene was a bit dull and basic but... maybe your right
.... I will try my best to fit one in for you!
It's okay...
I'm sure once the plot shows itself it will be a lot more interesting.
Yeah this one was sort of just to introduce the characters and setting, so I could add on to it without having odd ends everywhere. I'm still pretty new to writing, but its a lot of fun.
I wanted to see the Princess...
But you left her out. Anyway, nice start but maybe some mouths and subtitles would help immensely.
Yeah, I couldn't find a voice actor for the Princess, and her lines weren't very important... because I forgot she gave you the lute. So now I have to add that in later.
Sorry. No cigar.
Not clever. Not funny. Maybe you should stick with the action flashes.
O' Deadly Night.
I don't know why his singing is killing them, but it sure is funny as hell.
haha deadly night al right
Twist ending would have been better.
The audience sees the blood and hears the eating. They assume the monster is eating the boy, but it would have been better if it was the boy who ate the monster.
to be honest, that's a great idea. However, this was an animation I randomly made while in the making of an episode of my "carrot" series so not alot of effort went into this. I'll try to add some twist-storyline features in another one. Thanks for viewing it though :)
You should get flash.
You can create much better looking artwork for SWF is you make them with Flash. Also, a lot of your scenes were just blank screens with a text box. Maybe drawing your characters at different angles will make it more interesting.
Next time, I'll add more details in my movies. Also, SWF easy is too limited to make drawings, That's why I always use a drawing programs to make scenes and everything else. Thank your for the review.
Well, I didn't learn anything...
But I was wondering what program you preferred and you answered that. Is there a website or somewhere I can see your work? Can Maya do good human models? I use Swift 3d and it's easy to use but I think I may need something better.
Well i do not actually have experience in Maya, but i know others that are. I'm going into 3-D animation, not modeling. But Maya i know is not free, but it is the standard for most modeling projects. And yes, i know it does make good human models. I've seen the work.
Fun fact: Jimmy Neutron was made with mostly Maya
Damn you.
Now I'm going to spend all day trying to remember what that song was from!
face the boss by Blake Robinson ^^
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