teejay-number13's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lust and Passion Ep: 2]

You have serious issues with your camera. I watched it three times and each time it did something different. Usually misaligned with the animation so you get a lot of white space. Especially at the end, so I couldn't see the final punchline (what became of the shrunk dude).

Flaxington responds:

Fixed (hopefully) Thanks for letting me know.

[Sonic Tournament Ep.1]

So we all make the flashes as good as our skills allow, and we improve over time. But even at it's lowest, there is still a certain standard you should meet before releasing, and this flash falls way, way below that. I suggest looking at the way other Sonic sprite flashes are done.

TheDemonShooter responds:

Its not even made in flash. But, il try out flash.

[FV: Bar's bullet time]

"Criticize all you want, I don't care."

Hmm... I think I see your problem.

marti031 responds:

Thanks for the understanding man

[Formed Enemies Opening]

This was not an opening, it was a music video. I don't see why people keep confusing the two and I don't understand the obsession of people to make these long intros instead of just actually doing the episodes. Not to mention this had better have a skip button if you do use it in the series or you'll bore your audience into voting 0 before it even starts. Openings should be no more then 30-60 seconds at the maximum.
Sorry for the low score but the thing that really chafed me was the scenes were incredibly slow paced, almost like you padded the animation to make sure it fit the entire song. It's an intro, why are we watching 45 second clips that look like they might have been copied directly from the episodes?

Alvc57 responds:

Its a opening I use the music of Sonic 2006. and a intro can should be more than 60 seconds like 90.
But my ending will have 87 seconds.

[Sonic Unxpct Advent EP: 2]

I remember watching this before. Why did you delete this and then re-submit? I didn't notice any changes.

superhyperturbosonic responds:

I know this was on Newgrounds like 3 years ago and when I tried to edit it I couldn't so I had to upload a new one. And like I said you wont see much of a difference to the one 3 years ago the only thing which has changed is the graphics and a huge improvement in spelling because people were getting really annoyed so yea.. :) thank you for watching

[A.S.T Opening Battle!]

Well, the battle didn't have to be... THAT one-sided. But it was nice that Mario got knocked out of the tournament early.

Winglessangelful responds:

Loool xD yeaah I just wanted show everyone That im rreally gonna Use everyone you Pick ^^ Now that the Op is over Serious Battles will come on :)

[All Sprites Tournament!]

Pretty ambitious project. Can't wait to see if you come through. 2 stars because the flash is just some text boxes. You should have given us an opening fight or something to showcase your skills. These mixed sprite tournaments aren't really that interesting to me though. Mainly because they require you to assume that Naruto actually stands a chance against Vegeta (as one example). But since you asked, I guess I would like to see Kid Buu.

Winglessangelful responds:

Nice comment, And the Opening battle is being Done now, this was just to see who, everyone wants to be in it

[Chaos War Ep.4 pt.2-a]

It was pretty good. Except for the Mecha-Sonic parts that were too similar to SMBZ.

JohnTheHedgechidna responds:

I will say this about it: I was testing out throughout this episode different ways to make a Mecha fight. I tried my own approach to it then I tried an approach one of my friends on Skype suggested to me, though it was not my intention to make it look like SMBZ

[Rise of chaos episode 2 c]

@kdaza26 - Don't you mean he "tried"? Ha. Punisher's problem is not his crappy animation or his incoherent story. It's his inability to recognize his own mistakes and his habit of making unrelated excuses. Even constructive criticism he sees as being hateful and abusive.

@Punisher - But on to this flash. It's visually more appealing then most of your other work but it's also incomplete. You can't submit an unfinished project and then tell people they have no right to criticize it because it's not done yet. When you submit a project, finished or not, you are putting it up for criticism. A better idea would be to do a FP post or a post in the forums (assuming you haven't been banned from that again for making useless posts). The improvement in your animation won't make any difference if people can't make sense of your story. I've been telling you that from the get-go.

Punisher33 responds:

my incoherent sotry line reall? my story line is pretty damn solid dude. i got my plot up and running i got everything good for it. why do you think i put the plot of the story line there at the first episode. so people can read the plot. it's not my fault people don't know how to read. so. like i said. this issue with you and i is far from over. episode 2 is taking me a while for the simple fact that i got this shit slammeed pretty good. i got this entire thing handled. go read. i got my plot up and everything so before you judge anything go. read. the plot is simple. an anchient evil awakens after years of being trapped in a crypt from an anchient battle by using the three stages of chaos. what's more simple than that. the rest of the episode will be each episode will have the plot in the beginning so this way no one can mistake it and they will read in the description. the most simple plot any one can muster up. this plot this time around is real simple to understand.

[Superman vs Hulk]

Not really all that good. But I did think it was funny at the end where he said he used his ice breath to freeze the gamma cells in the Hulk's body and the melting them away with his heat vision. That did sound like one of those "wouldn't actually work" solutions that Superman occasionally pulls out of his ass.

Rojay101 responds:

actually it can work anyway thanks