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[Ashton Origans preview]

Buttons not working.

He says "You're mine!" then a black screen with a next button pops up. The button doesn't do anything and I can't get any further. Was that it? As far as your animation, you don't need such a large background for such small sprites.

sonicx666666 responds:

If your pressing the button repeatedly then it won't go anywhere if you look to the top left when you press the button the words will come in like a typewriter after the finished you can continue.

[M&S: Two Worlds Teaser]

Not another one.

Okay, I'm a bit of a hard-ass when it comes to these Mario/Sonic Crossover flashes, because SO MANY people are doing them. Unfortunately, your teaser doesn't give enough info on the story for me to judge it yet, but I will say that the animation and sound seemed pretty good. You got a low score from me because it was a teaser. Everyone makes damn teasers. Would it kill people to just go ahead and make the first episode and let others give them feedback on that?

Lizam4 responds:

Yeah that's understandable ^^
As I said, the teaser was released to push me to complete the real thing. However, a little feedback before I make the final release can always help! :)

Thanks for your input!

[Beat Up Baldy]

Funny.

I'll give you credit because this is the first flash done like this that I've ever seen. It would be better if you spent more time working on the synchronization. Some of the hits were off.

JohnnySkul responds:

Your wrong... They weren't off at all.

[Geek love]

Needs sound.

Other then that, animation was good. I don't know about the title though. Never really considered Izzy or Joe to be geeks.

KajsaBlad responds:

I realise now that it really does sound condesending, which was not my intention at all :) maybe they're more like nerds (?) in a good way of course! Sorry if it seems like I'm mocking them; I really like both characters, but now I can't think of a new title :( (Nerd Love was already taken..)

[To Kill a Mocking BERD!!]

A sucky flash based on a sucky book.

Yeah, that about covers it.

Solrac responds:

A sucky review by a sucky artist. Yeah, that about covers it.

[Kawaii Battle Stars]

Just not my type of humor.

Well, I like parodies and this seems to be trying to make fun of Japanese female superhero shows, but it really just comes off as a bunch of babbling that isn't clever or funny. I guess some people think spouting random nonsense with your voice constantly changing pitch and your tongue hanging out of your mouth is humor. Not me.

AxelTheNavy responds:

Butt Fox 64, now with Rumble Pak feature!

[Cheromanchequois]

Awesome artwork!

What program did you use for the artwork, was it really flash or even done on a computer? Anyway, funny story. I don't know why people put so much damn emphasis on their so called 'roots.' As far as I'm concerned, we're all humans.

Pixmintro responds:

I used Flash for all the animation for the movie. For the backgrounds I used Photoshop and imported the png's into Flash. Then when I was done with everything, I compiled it in After Effects and applied effects to it.

[Sonic Sprite Test]

The animation was pretty good.

Just don't make a Super Mario Bros. Z ripoff like everyone else is doing.

polorichy responds:

Thanks teejay
I won`t make a ripoff
But, you know i`m a fan
I have my ideas of course
But thanks for reviewing

[Raccoon and HG - The Bee]

I like it.

So simple yet I find it appealing.

TGCRed responds:

Wow, thanks! I'm glad you like it! : D

[Robot Master GP: Round 1]

Not bad.

The animation and the audio didn't seem bad to me. Just pair these fights with some kind of story and it'll work out fine. Maybe adding some life bars to the fight would help the audience keep track of the battle and also add drama, like when the hero's life starts to get low.

GreySparks responds:

Ok, thanks! This was my first time using sound, so I had a lot of problems. I'll tag a health bar, and maybe a tournament grid on. Thanks for the feed back, this was my first proper flash.