teejay-number13's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nazo Test]

What was the point of uploading this?

Are you trying to prove to us that you can trace someone else's drawings? Even if you didn't trace it, there's no point in submitting a test movie. It's not even a trailer.

waelalz responds:

I told you, i wanted to demonstrate my skills to the outer world

[Zelda: O.O.S. Episode 3]

Pretty cool.

I thought you had given up on this. Sorry I didn't get the voice for Mido right, but I'm thinking that maybe my voice wasn't really what you wanted for that character anyway.

DARKRYAN responds:

Nope. I don't give up on things that easily. XD. It helps me figure out more techniques and helps me hone my style. And yeah, your voice didn't match his very much. But there'll be more roles in the future. (^_^).

[Super Mario Bros SMASH In]

Lame. Another SMBZ flash.

I love reviewing these shitty SMBZ ripoffs and there's no end in sight. This is the second Mario Bros. Z intro I've seen with the DBZ Kai song. Only the other one had better animation. Plus you used the Japanese audio, which is ten times more irritating.
Your sprites are low quality and your animation is twitchy. You also need to learn when to use graphics instead of movie clips and vica versa. I can forgive the shitty animation if you put out an entertaining story, but for an intro/test? Not a chance!

Joe-You-Know responds:

It's is NOT a smbz ripoff. although I do like his work, my series is way different than his. My series doesn't include sonic, and even though it didn't portray it in the intro, it isn't Dragon Ball Mario oriented. I did rush the intro, so I'm sorry you're unpleased, but I have in my story hundreds of koopas and toadstools fighting, and I wasn't able to show that in here like I wanted. Thank you for the review.

[Pokemon PoopBrown Version]

Another Pokemon parody...

Am I the only one who makes Pokemon flashes that aren't parodies? Well, I see what you were saying now. The voices would definitely be a nice addition to my series, at least if I could get them in the same quality as these. Lip-synching sprites still irritates the hell out of me though...

As far as your flash, well it was boring. Dirty old men and poop jokes are pretty stale. and not up my alley anyway.

Eastbeast responds:

Thanks for your honesty. Yeah adding voice actors and getting outside help makes the process a whole lot more fun and interesting for the viewer.

[Mario Vs Luigi (test)]

It's okay but...

It still falls short of the standards that have been set for these Super Mario Bros. Z type flashes. If you can come up with a good original story then that will more then make up for it.

tal9x9 responds:

ok thanks for the tips
and it's not smbz style it's dbz style next one who's telling me that will find a mushroom in his hand

[Project Z]

I love to criticize these crappy Sonic flashes.

Just because you point out the flaws in your description, doesn't mean they are forgiven. The quality of this is so bad that the text isn't even readable. I'm thinking this was originally a video you imported into flash.

I still fail to understand why people submit these super-shitty teasers and then claim that the first episode will be better. Why even bother with the teaser in the first place? If your trying to get people excited about your series, this is not the way.

R-o-X-a-S responds:

ur rite about everything... i did use video-to-flash converter.... i will get flash and add music and that and i will not subit teasers anymore... thx for ur critism

[You are a pirate!!!]

Pirates suck.

It cracks me up how pirates are so popular these days thanks to Disney, especially with kids shows. Even though back then, they were pretty much the terrorists of the time period. Maybe a couple of hundred years from now, kids will be singing "You are a Taliban!"

Steinberg responds:

Hahaha, yeah. I kinda like pirates, something about their adventurous nature. When actually they are just a bunch of criminals. If it was only the adventure it would be much cooler. People tend to glorify the "easy life".

I do agree that they are overrated. The internet is obsessed with pirates and zombies and... Meh, a lot of stuff that are kinda cool... but not really that cool.
Thanks for reviewing.

[School Animation Project]

Not all that good.

The flash is just too poorly made considering how many people you put in the credits. Did none of them know how to draw? And why did your car scenes have no backgrounds? Then all the hospital scenes where nothing but uploaded photos.

RPRMT0054611 responds:

like i said, 4 days is not enough to make a top notch flash. din't ye read my description?

[The E Fighters VS Osukro]

Well your animation is decent...

At least compared to some of the other crappy DBZ flashes people have been uploading. The real weakness here is the story. I have no idea who is fighting who or why. How about instead of uploading tests and random fight scenes, you start working on some episodes that start from the beginning and introduce us to the characters and plot.

LSWBeast responds:

first of all ill tell u in the part 2 k

[Test and svs improved int]

Let's see...

What to improve?.. Well for starters, I'll tell you what I tell everyone who makes this crappy tests. DON'T!
If you plan to make a series, then submit only the full episodes. If episode 1 sucks, then make episode 2 better and so on. Most great series on Newgrounds and other sites that I've seen started with lower quality and improved over time.
As far as your actual test here, well your background and camera focus didn't move at all. So what you were really just doing was parading movie clips in front of a static background.

tal9x9 responds:

yes i learned i'm not uploading tests anymore