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[NegaSonic Unleashed Ep.3]

Silver likes ET for the Atari...

Are you even old enough to remember that game? Anyway, I'm going to call bullshit on youtube making you take these off because of the release of Sonic Unleashed.
I'm having a hard time following this story. There's too many characters and I have no idea who most of them are. Your transformations make no sense, and there seems to be no end to how many times they can advance to another level. Each time the sprite getting more ridiculous looking. I mean, I love it when characters power up and transform but I think your overdoing it. Also, you sometimes declare a character is at their 100% maximum, only to have them power up more later. There's no consistency, or maybe I'm just mixed up because I have no idea who is who. Especially since Silver turned into Sonic, and then Dark Spines Sonic for no reason!
If these really are just some old ones your pulling out of your closet, then how about making some new ones? And maybe slow down the story a bit and introduce the characters at a more even pace.

MarnicX responds:

It's true, SEGA announced that anything containing the words "sonic" and "unleashed" side-by-side was to be taken off of YouTube. If you don't believe me, then you may continue to jack off to your two dads having sex =3

[Ultimate Heroes EP.1]

No bad.

It actually has my interest. I just hope it doesn't turn into another Super Mario Bros. Z clone. And for the love of god, don't use Mecha-Sonic as a villian. I'd like to see somebody new for a change. And try to avoid using music that has been used a ton already, like the one in the beginning fight.

waelalz responds:

mecha sonic is just an idea in my head that got deleted, if you watch this episode, you will know that i changed this stuff, so BYE

[Nazo Test]

What was the point of uploading this?

Are you trying to prove to us that you can trace someone else's drawings? Even if you didn't trace it, there's no point in submitting a test movie. It's not even a trailer.

waelalz responds:

I told you, i wanted to demonstrate my skills to the outer world

[NegaSonic Unleashed Ep.1]

Getting better.

I can see your improving. The only real issues I have is your custom transformation sprites are just the back of their heads cut and pasted into several layers which is supposed to make them look like they have big hair. But it really just makes them look silly. The other thing is the parts with repeated punching and blasting last a little too long so it gets annoying and repetitive. I like the music though. Oh and I know you added a scene select, but I think your intro also lasts too long.

[Super Mario Bros SMASH In]

Lame. Another SMBZ flash.

I love reviewing these shitty SMBZ ripoffs and there's no end in sight. This is the second Mario Bros. Z intro I've seen with the DBZ Kai song. Only the other one had better animation. Plus you used the Japanese audio, which is ten times more irritating.
Your sprites are low quality and your animation is twitchy. You also need to learn when to use graphics instead of movie clips and vica versa. I can forgive the shitty animation if you put out an entertaining story, but for an intro/test? Not a chance!

Joe-You-Know responds:

It's is NOT a smbz ripoff. although I do like his work, my series is way different than his. My series doesn't include sonic, and even though it didn't portray it in the intro, it isn't Dragon Ball Mario oriented. I did rush the intro, so I'm sorry you're unpleased, but I have in my story hundreds of koopas and toadstools fighting, and I wasn't able to show that in here like I wanted. Thank you for the review.

[Mario Kart DeStruction]

True.

I think Mario Kart Wii was ten times worse with the rubber necking.

[Sonic Flash Episode 2]

Mind-numbing...

The animation was so-so, the sound was a bit better, but there was no story. Just a bunch of constant, pointless action, like a Micheal Bay film. It made me want to flap my lips with my finger while making stupid sounds.

[Pokemon PoopBrown Version]

Another Pokemon parody...

Am I the only one who makes Pokemon flashes that aren't parodies? Well, I see what you were saying now. The voices would definitely be a nice addition to my series, at least if I could get them in the same quality as these. Lip-synching sprites still irritates the hell out of me though...

As far as your flash, well it was boring. Dirty old men and poop jokes are pretty stale. and not up my alley anyway.

Eastbeast responds:

Thanks for your honesty. Yeah adding voice actors and getting outside help makes the process a whole lot more fun and interesting for the viewer.

[Mario Vs Luigi (test)]

It's okay but...

It still falls short of the standards that have been set for these Super Mario Bros. Z type flashes. If you can come up with a good original story then that will more then make up for it.

tal9x9 responds:

ok thanks for the tips
and it's not smbz style it's dbz style next one who's telling me that will find a mushroom in his hand