teejay-number13's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Video Game Predator]

It's not the fee...

I can handle that. It's the crappy xbox hardware that breaks down constantly that is a crime.

[the dark one Episode 1]

Let's see...

Well, you're right. It's nice not to see the usual suspects, like Sonic and Mario. But a Sailor Moon/DBZ crossover is far from original. Plus the story is pretty generic, "bad guy shows up, want's powerful item good guys have."

Your animation and your sprite quality suck ass, but that's something that will improve with experience. A few things to watch out for. Make bigger text boxes, because when the characters said a lot, you compacted the text to fit into the box and it was kind of hard to read. And there were a few frames with text boxes that you forgot to program it to stop, so it just skipped the text box.

A far as your grammar, if english isn't your primary language, then I can forgive. But if it is your primary language then there is no excuse for grammar that bad.

Punisher33 responds:

thank you for the constructive criticism, and i'm trying to end fanboy stuff, completely, i mean alvin earthworm enspired me to make my own series. and i use classic tween 2.0 action script. so it's not gonna look the same

[Sonic Wars Episode I]

Hey pretty good!

I'm glad you're not exactly following the star wars story verbatim. I think it will be cool if Sonic has to remaster his speed skills and also combine them with learning to use a light sabre. The only thing I didn't like was your chase scene with the starships lasted too long. It lasted so long even the music ran out.

[DragonBall Z In Real Life]

Gross.

It would have been funnier if he had just shot the Kamehameha out of his penis. I mean, you already went there so why not?

ManimeInfinite responds:

He did, but his power level was under 9000 so it reverted to liquid form

[MechaSonic VS MechaFulgP3]

Lame.

Well, this is episode 3 and so far we're still just seeing these guys fight for no reason with only slight improvements in the animation. If you hadn't told us it was Fulgore, then I never would have made that connection. Aren't there actual Fulgore sprites? You'll need an interesting story if you want this to be better.

[Battle of The Bulge (WW2)]

If I'm not mistaken...

Japan and Germany didn't officially become allies until after Pearl Harbor because it was the attack on Pearl harbor that prompted Hitler to declare war on the US.
The only assassination attempt on Hitler up to that point was in Munich 1939 and it was not by his own guards.
The Brits did not attack Germany from the east, that was the Red Army (Russians).
I didn't have time to check all the facts, but you get the idea. As far as the flash itself, it wasn't bad. I might have made something like this myself if they had flash back when I was in school.

[Gohan Powers Up To SSJ2]

Congratulations...

You know how to trace (badly) and rip audio. Even if you did draw this yourself, what's the point of this flash? Maybe re-purposing the drawings and audio to create events that didn't happen in the show would be more interesting.

[Anal Adventures]

Crap.

I see you've decided on the title for your auto-biography but it might help with the story if you actually do something.

But seriously, about the flash, if you'd bothered to give it some length , then I bet it would have been really popular. This kind of retarded, gay sex flash shit (and maybe adding a touch of heterosexuality), is just what NGers seem to love these days. Not me though.

[Chaos Control pt.1-2]

Not too bad.

The animation was good and the music was appropriate. The story was lacking, but the cliffhanger at the end makes me want to see the next episode. What really lowered my score was the use of Mecha-Sonic. I'm absolutely SICK of seeing him in the these Sonic sprite flashes.

[Sonic VeloX Super Batalha]

Not really good...

Maybe some english subtitles would help. Try google translate, it may not be 100% accurate but it's better then nothing.