teejay-number13's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pokemans - Brock]

Hey it's the same dumb shit everyone else is doing in their pokemon parodies. Only this was dumber and shittier then those.

[Pokemon Darkness Ep 1]

" I came up for the idea for this animation when i was browsing around newgrounds for videos on pokemon. I thought to myself why ain't there a proper video series that is like a pokemon game." - dumbird

I'm going to go hang myself now. But first, my review.

Even with crappy flash 8, you can do better with the animation. Also please make better custom sprites for Andrew. The story could be interesting once we actually see whats going on. And the last thing is the "walking on water shoes." Don't make up stupid things to explain why you were too lazy to animate a getaway boat or a helicopter. I am interested to find out what is going to happen though.

dumbird responds:

Thanks for the comment. In a few days i'll make changes like i'll give him a jetpack.
i'll check out your series as a sorry for my comment.

[Dragon Ball Multiverse 2]

This is pretty good, seeing all the twists and turns the DBZ story could have taken.

[PETA vs Mario]

That was the most realistic PETA ad I've ever seen.

[George Lucas' Farewell]

Lol. Sounds like one of Alvin Earthworm's rants.

[Dark Sonic Vs. Shadow]

Wait... WTF? I was watching it (space bar worked) but then suddenly it cut back to the preloader with the music still playing and everything. Was that supposed to happen? If so, then maybe calling this a "preview" or "teaser" may have been less misleading. Or it least putting in a to be continued...

[Beginner's Flash Tutorial]

Nothing I didn't already know, but I definitely could have used this when I first started. The only thing I didn't get is why you said at the beginning "since we're doing the basics, let's just choose ActionScript 2.0". You're tutorial didn't cover any coding so why should they pick AS2? Actually, if a person is new to flash and they're not already familiar with AS2, they should start out learning AS3.

Wavechan responds:

There's coding in the preloader section! Mm.. but I think the reason why I decided to teach AS2 was because I tried to do a bit of a test run with my friends with AS3 and they had headaches. It could've just been me teaching it badly though, but they were able to understand AS2 much easier because they weren't at all programmers. @_@! Thank you for your review!

actually, now that I think about it, you mentioning this reminded me that I forgot to write a whole page about putting script for button links in the tutorial ;~~~; THANK YOU!!

[Ashton & Amy]

I do enjoy these Sonic RPG series/games but I saw a few things in here. Firstly I'm sure Amy has running sprites. It was weird to see her "walking" from Metal Sonic. Next, why was the sky all black? Was it nighttime? Make sure to have a background. Thirdly, when you make the battles, don't try to pad it's length/difficulty by making the enemy have huge HP and hero attacks doing very little. A short but challenging battle is better the a long easy battle at keeping the audience's interest. Lastly, this preview told us nothing about the plot or conflict of the series, so I imagine it will not generate much interest.

[Pony Star Racers]

Yeah I get the Oban Star Racers thing, but why give them the human faces. That was creepy. Good animation though.

[Molly & the Magic Ponies]

No. This is not funny. Or clever. At all. It's just a bunch of stuttering. Stuttering is not funny. And it was painful to watch, like having to listen to a mentally impaired person with a speech impediment tell a bad joke with no punch line. I don't think good animation makes up for poor writing but this didn't even have that either.