teejay-number13's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lust and Passion Ep: 2]

You have serious issues with your camera. I watched it three times and each time it did something different. Usually misaligned with the animation so you get a lot of white space. Especially at the end, so I couldn't see the final punchline (what became of the shrunk dude).

Flaxington responds:

Fixed (hopefully) Thanks for letting me know.

[dark tails vs scythe.]

Pretty abysmal. And what's up with that dude in the corner. Is he supposed to be your logo? It might help if your logo took up less space and you went with one that can't be confused for a character on the screen.

[Shadow Chaos Control]

What part of don't submit tests and unfinished projects to the portal do people not understand. What was the point of this? To show us that you can barely animate this? If you're looking for feedback, you should do a FP post or ask in the forums or something. And what would you ask anyway? "Hey guys, do you think I do a good job of copying every other sprite animators version of Chaos Control?"

Sorry to keep ragging on you but stop submitting clips and 4 minute long opening credits and actually get down to business making your series.

[ven vs blood]

BG Music: Runs together.
Length: Don't blink.
Story: None.
Movement: Choppy.
Background: Pixelated nightmare.
Effrot: Little.

Try harder next time!

[Batman Hates Bronies]

Pretty funny, but you lose a star for the painfully predictable ending. It would have been better if you had a Joker reference, like maybe a big, red smile painted on the Pinkie Pie doll followed by some laughter in the background. That would have been awesome.

[Sonic Tournament Ep.1]

So we all make the flashes as good as our skills allow, and we improve over time. But even at it's lowest, there is still a certain standard you should meet before releasing, and this flash falls way, way below that. I suggest looking at the way other Sonic sprite flashes are done.

TheDemonShooter responds:

Its not even made in flash. But, il try out flash.

[FV: Bar's bullet time]

"Criticize all you want, I don't care."

Hmm... I think I see your problem.

marti031 responds:

Thanks for the understanding man

[Formed Enemies Opening]

This was not an opening, it was a music video. I don't see why people keep confusing the two and I don't understand the obsession of people to make these long intros instead of just actually doing the episodes. Not to mention this had better have a skip button if you do use it in the series or you'll bore your audience into voting 0 before it even starts. Openings should be no more then 30-60 seconds at the maximum.
Sorry for the low score but the thing that really chafed me was the scenes were incredibly slow paced, almost like you padded the animation to make sure it fit the entire song. It's an intro, why are we watching 45 second clips that look like they might have been copied directly from the episodes?

Alvc57 responds:

Its a opening I use the music of Sonic 2006. and a intro can should be more than 60 seconds like 90.
But my ending will have 87 seconds.