Your grammar sucks. There you didn't hear it, you JUST READ IT! HAHAHA! Also caps.
Anyway, my only real gripe with this is you're introducing way too many characters and half of them are just Sonic edits. You've got the seven star beasts, the 8 chaos beasts, traditional Mario characters, and I'm guessing Megaman and Sonic characters are going to show up eventually. The soundtrack was at least good I thought.