teejay-number13's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SMB:GT TGA - Ep 1]

I think it deserves a chance. You're sprite work is very competent, and you're grammar is improved over some of your previous works. Although there were a few sentences that were off. I had two major problems with this. First, it was a little too much like SMBZ episode 1. Person finds powerful object, villain comes and kills them, Mario & friends having competition, Bowser crashes party.

The second thing and my biggest beef is that you called this the "Official sequel series to SMBZ!" That's a pretty bold claim. I hate to break it too you, but it can't be "official" unless Alvin gave you his okay, which I find that to be highly unlikely. So for now, it's just KaijuKing's SMBZ fan series spinoff.

[Zelda UO BETA [REMAKE]: Episode 1]

I'd say the backgrounds have improved a lot over the original, but the people still kind of look the same to me. I'm not sure why you decided to remake when you probably could have just picked up where you left off. Are you planning to change the story?

[Gigi]

I'll review this like I don't know you. In other words be honest. I liked it. I got a nostalgic feeling from it. It reminded me of the part in Major'a Mask where you meet the scarecrow in the observatory. The gag where he says "Oh ouch. My everything!" Caught me off-guard so I laughed. The only problem I saw was some of the more complex animations looked a little South-Parky to me. Like when Gigi was coming in through the door.
It will be interesting to see if you make this into a game or an animated series.

Budj responds:

Stop being so spiteful! You turned on me!

Lol jk. I appreciate the honest opinions buddy! I see what you mean too, I might try a more traditional animation approach next time if my patience persists. :>

[The rise of chaos ep2]

I have to say I'm not disappointed, in that I was hoping this would suck and it does. There is SO much wrong with this. You title screen takes a minute to get going even after you click play. There's no scene select. Your 3d backgrounds are neat, but your 2d animations do not sync up with it. Your music runs together at several points. Some of your sprites or poorly recolored. You'd think with the fill tool, that would be easy. But it looks like you just drew over them with the paintbrush tool using a single color, borders and everything. I'd complain about your story, but I couldn't tell what was happening, because you don't have manual controls and the text boxes move to fast to read. Especially since you kept changing the font size and spacing to try and fit what they were saying into one text box instead of making several. So the text boxes range form a few words to whole paragraphs. And worst of all, it paused and wouldn't continue when Chun-Li mentioned Darien and Serena's impending doom.

So in short I'd say this is your worst episode is a while. Probably because you couldn't find anyone to help you make it since you have a habit of turning on your collaborators the first time they criticize you.

Punisher33 responds:

firstly. there should be no reason for the pause there. firstly stop being spiteful. firstly you turned on me. when you thought i was not lestining to you. you turned on me. second i busted my ass for months making sure everything was perfect. the tweening is perfect the animation in my opinion is flauless. i can't impress the pathetic mario and pokemon sonic same bull shit fanboys because that's all ya get horny off of. i did things the right way. i fallow all tutorials. people like you who turn on me. you turned on me dude. not the other way around. simple as that. i have dislexia. you proud of your self now you prick? honestly. i told you over and over again,. not to give my name due to privacy reasons and you gave it even though i told you not too. you turned on me. so go screw off dude. seriously. i did everything possible to make this the best thing i could and because it's not up too your stuff shows you how pathetic you really are. did you maybe think the only reason why you got the fans that you got is because your fallowing mainstream shit? i did every god damn thing and nothing makes you people happy. your spiteful. all of you. none of you get that wet dream from the status quo on this site which is an issue i constantly attack over and over again. and i won't go main stream i refuse too. your a douch bag. nothing i put together made you happy as a collaberator than you broke my number one rule after i told you. i told you not to use my name because of my privacy situation and you broke it. you turned on me. simple as that. i snapped at you because you had no common sense. i did everything possible here and the same attackers attack. go shoot down some crappy animator not me dude. i did everything possible. you don't like my stuff because of what ever reason it was. but when we was first collaberating all you kept telling me was improvements improvements improvements. and it was not a confidence booster either. you went from that. to being a spiteful douch bag.you can't be trusted. how you brake a rule that some one gave you. not to use that person's name. and you turn on them. you need to think about your shit dude stop with the spite. simple as that.

[Sonic Rave Dance]

I'm not convinced this is yours. Mainly because the button logo goes to a deviantArt account different from yours.

[Smzx Ending]

What every character in the series looks like, in case you've forgotten...

[Smzx Opening]

It are maked my ears bleed. At least its not painfully long. You can read my other reviews if you want to hear me go on about how these standalone intros are a waste of time. My problem with this is all you really do is showcase all your characters and have them transform. Way to spoil your story. I guess you just assumed we would expect everyone to transform anyway in a series rife with anime cliches. Well anyway, episode 2 maybe?

[A Twisted Halloween]

Not bad. I like the way they're indifferent to the bad shit going on around them.

[new smzx tittle screen]

You uploaded your menu screen only? WHY? Is your series so dull that the menu screen is the most exciting part? Your menu screen isn't even interesting. I think the one you used in episode 1 was better. So you added some glow filters, wow big improvement (not really). The characters aren't even centered properly on the screen.

[Rubert da Koopa]

Thanks, I haven't seen a truly hilarious Mario parody in a while. I especially love the part where he falls down into the pit.