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[TytrunTIV: Revitalize]

Needs a preloader. It just seems like some parts were better animated then others. Like the battle with Redonic and the void soldiers was cool, but the first battle with tytrun and alastor was poorly done. And why does alastor's sprites look like you forgot to set the trace bitmap to pixels? Also, try to optimize your audio, because I don't think this should be 15 mbs. One last thing, don't overuse narration text, try to integrate what's happening into the dialogue of the characters. Okay, I'm done.

marti031 responds:

lol okay lets start answering questions:
Q.why does alastor's sprites look like you forgot to set the trace bitmap to pixels?

A. the computer i was using at the time was laggy so when i traced the bitmap and i put many corners, the computer became laggy and when it came too; it chose a different set.

Q.Also, try to optimize your audio, because I don't think this should be 15 mbs

A. I know right XD

okay now, i'm done:D

[Yoshi's Brawl]

This is what it looked like when I played Yoshi in Melee and the original. But for some reason, I never could get the hang of Brawl.

[War of the Shyguys]

Awesome. Glad you finally were able to get it out. I know you've been working on it for a while. There's not much I can tell you I haven't already, but I do think your level of detail is great. And I like the small animations you do that aren't really necessary (like the shyguys getting hit by their own ships as they take off, or the piano guy and the band playing as the ship blows up, etc.) It makes it more interesting to watch. Glad I could help and congrats again.

Eastbeast responds:

Thank you man. I've said everything to you as well, but I'll say it again! I'm glad you did the 3D stuff plus a little character development, I'm looking forward to our future works together too. Thanks for helping me push this through

[Grover's Competition]

I guess if there was an ass sucking contest, this flash would win. But I gave it one star because the joke at the end actually made me laugh.

[Taco-Man Game Master 6]

I liked it. It reminds me of that 3 stooges episode "Hoi Polloi". I lowered my score a little because the ending was excruciatingly predictable. As soon as Taco Man said "Oh she's fine." I knew how it would turn out since I've seen the joke before.

[SSBM Hands Test]

When people submit tests like this, I wondering what they're supposed to be testing? Besides our patience...

You do know that you can allow public previews of flashes in the project system without having to submit it to the portal or use the dumping grounds. Use the forums to advertise your preview.

[sonic vs goku... agian]

It's not so bad if watched as a music video and not a random sprite battle.

[SMB: The Mushroom Hero 10]

Great! I'm glad to see this series continued.

[The Moon Guardian]

I think it's a contrast in talent. For example, the backgrounds are clearly better drawn then the people. I do like the ambient feel of it though. But as I've told others, I focus mainly on the story and this one was quite empty. It seems to be a first episode to me, but is it actually a stand alone movie? There's a lot that was left out. For example, if you could light the moon from atop the tower that was under a shield then where was the mother going when they were attacked? And who were the villians and why did they want to prevent the moon from being lit? Some dialogue or have one reveal a face would have been nice. I feel like they were left as cloaked figures because it was easier to draw. And why was that guy a fox (or whatever)? Not that that's bad, but it makes me even more interested to learn about the world you've made in this story.

If you're going to make some more episodes about this story, then hopefully my questions will be answered. If not, then next time try to make the story a bit more fulfilling.

Tyler responds:

I'm not opposed to hear what you're saying, I appreciate the review.

Perhaps I failed at directing to make that clear, but the barrier was only valid while there was a guardian, in this case, the mother died and the barrier that hid them became void thus making lighting the moon from atop the tower feasible. The girl didn't take the role until she completed the task. While the barrier was up, they were hidden (shown early on), and lighting the moon from within was not an option.

[Kingdom hearts corrupted]

You could have at least told us what to look forward to. Is this a sprite flash? Fully animated? Or a flash game maybe? All we know is that it's a Kingdom Hearts something. Not enough to get me interested.